Poetry thread (44)

1 Name: Random Anonymous 2005-11-18 17:27 ID:Heaven

Write poetry. Do it now. I don't care if it sucks. I don't care if you have nothing to say. Stop making excuses. Write some poetry and add it to this thread.

29 Name: Random Anonymous 2005-12-07 07:02 ID:Heaven

this is a nice one, whoever made it should post here too:

The leader

Patient and steady with all he must bear,
Ready to accept every challenge with care,
Easy in manner, yet solid as steel,
Strong in his faith, refreshingly real,
Isn't afraid to propose what is bold,
Doesn't conform to the usual mold,
Eyes that have foresight, for hindsight wont do
Never back down when he sees what is true
Tells it all straight, and means it all too
Bracing for war, but praying for peace
Using his power so evil will cease:
So much a leader and worthy of trust,
Here stands a man who will do what he must

30 Name: Random Anonymous 2005-12-07 16:58 ID:Heaven

Unfortunately, the serious poem >>29 is a lot crappier and embarrassing to read than the silly poems within >>1-28
Requesting better critiques

31 Name: Anonymous 2005-12-07 19:15 ID:Heaven

>>30

> Beware of acrostics! Some messages may seem harsh, but read it twice
> before responding to it. Here is an example:
> Gosh, what an awful writing!
> Old Miss Muffet woulda been a better speller;
> Objects and subjects all mixed up. I
> Don't think you've got a three-year-old's brain (sneer
> Just shut up next time you wanna say something,
> Okay? I'm tired of you.
> Bye, and I hope to never see you again!
> (See GOODJOB on the left column?)

32 Name: Random Anonymous 2005-12-08 17:02 ID:Heaven

Ha ha ha! That is a pretty funny poem, then. President Bush sucks!

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